Cartographer's Craft

Brilliant start. After reading several fics recently that abounded in Americanisms and where the author had only a nodding acquaintance with English grammar, I found it a great relief to read a tale that it is written in good English.

I know I started reading this a while back, but I don't think it had been completed at the time. It's nice to see that it's been finished, and I hope that the bits of humor which had me grinning (albeit mentally - I've got a rather nasty sunburn keeping me from moving my face too much) continue throughout the entirety of the tale.

A brilliant first chapter. The implications of the map are interesting. Much better than the beginning of most HBP "Search for the Horcruxes" stories.