Stealing Harry
By copperbadge
how exciting, the dialogue between moony and padfoot is well done. It flows well w/o many quirks...
Oh now the plot thickens! Remus heard
"cupboard"! I think the Dursleys are in a lot of trouble. I hope they get Harry away from the stupid D's. Thanks for writing. pms
"Where's Padfoot?" Harry asked, looking around for the big black dog.
"Padfoot's in the doghouse," Moony answered. Sirius grinned.
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"Hell of a job they do of it. You know he goes about in The Piglet's castoffs, don't you?"
"His name is Dudley."
"I don't care."
"My, we are petulant this afternoon, aren't we?"
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"I'm his family!"
"Not his blood."
"You're his blood!"
Remus lifted an eyebrow. "I'm a second-cousin of James' mother, once removed. There's a difference."
These parts had me laughing hard enough to see stars!
Lovin' it!
I've heard of that cult! The area has a very low incidence of black plague; apparently the locals have developed a strong immunity from their proximity to the plague-bearers.
I'm actualy enjoying this! Most of the time I end up being disapointed by this point in a story. Thanks