silvergoddess posted a comment on Monday 30th July 2007 12:22pm for Chapter 19
Been reading your fic for awhile, but haven't felt the need to review, because they're excellent stories. One thing that bothered me in this chapter was the translation of the word Hospites, I
believe that a better translation would be enemies instead of strangers, also the construction of the sentence is off. The verb beware should be at the end of the sentence. Sorry to sound nit picky,
but my latin teacher drilled proper grammer and such into my head ^_^
silvergoddess posted a comment on Monday 30th July 2007 12:22pm for Chapter 19