Laocoon's Children - The Philosopher's Stone
Chapter 1
By copperbadge
Reviews
Andrius posted a comment on Wednesday 3rd August 2011 6:32pm for Chapter 1
Silence for a minute, two, as they cleaned up a bit -- this was so much easier with magic -- and readjusted themselves to sleep
I thought they couldn't use their wands unless Harry was in mortal danger :)
roses in bloom posted a comment on Sunday 6th March 2011 5:54am for Chapter 1
Off to an excellent start! I just loved the scene with the Patil family- it isn't often that authors choose to describe such minor characters.
I especially loved this part: " Most of Padma's life was spent calmly using her wits to make sure her sister didn't bowl her over with typical Parvati enthusiasm."
Patches posted a comment on Sunday 7th May 2006 12:07pm for Chapter 1
Yeah! Harry, Neville, Draco, Padma and Parvati
all got their letters. Looks like members of a
clique! I understand some people have problems with change. It will be interesting to see how things go. Thanks for writing. pms
Christopher Estep posted a comment on Monday 16th January 2006 5:35pm for Chapter 1
Things are Decidedly Umusual Here. Severus *wants* Harry to come to Hogwarts, Narcissa is practically scared of his own shadow, Neville, while still a bit clumsy, is being raised by *Andromeda and Ted Tonks*, and is Dora's young stepbrother, and Draco is more of a Ravenclaw (or even a Hufflepuff) than the younger version of Lucius Malfoy. About the only folks that are the same are the Patil Sisters (Parvati and Padma).
Josan posted a comment on Wednesday 28th November 2012 3:40am for Chapter 1