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kerrlo posted a comment on Monday 5th November 2007 3:28pm for Chapter 27

Hey...I have read this story..and its sequels about a hundred time already..and have reviewed before too. Rereading this chapter..I found something that doesn't fit :

"It'd been eight years since they'd cast it last, and he hadn't been in on all of the work; Peter and Dumbledore had taken over from him in the last stages, so Sirius only knew theory a lot of the time anyway."

This implies that Dumbledore knew about Peter being the secret-keeper. I understand that this is an AU, but I had the impression that the events changed at the point from where Lupin's owl got lost - that certainly is repeated over and over throughout. And thus, this senetence deosn't make much sense..unless of course Peter and Dumbledore didn't do the spells together..which seems unlikely seeing as hoe you've described the fidelius ritual..

Just a thought..the story is wonderful, btw.

Just a thought...

Patches posted a comment on Sunday 7th May 2006 1:30am for Chapter 27

Not good but necessary to find a safe haven. I look forward to how this all works out. Thank you for writing. pms

Aurilia posted a comment on Friday 17th February 2006 5:00am for Chapter 27

Not bloody fair. Sirius and Remus deserved to continue raising Harry in Surrey, running the bookstore and visiting with the Tonks'. Harry deserved to be allowed to continue visiting with Snape and Oliver and the Weasleys. Not fair. Not fair.

But a ruddy good story, still.