Fic Chick posted a comment on Monday 20th October 2014 8:06am

It moved a bit slowly but was otherwise an excellent fic.

Fic Chick posted a comment on Sunday 19th October 2014 2:57pm

The whole powdered laughter bomb & patronus knife stuff was incredibly original. I don't think I've read anything like it.

(FYI - Snowy owls, like Hedwig, don't hoot; they bark.)

MattKennedy posted a comment on Monday 28th April 2014 1:02am

Great story. Love the way you brough Sirius back, and especially how he was paired up with Harry. I thought you developed their relationship very well. :D

billbrinkley posted a comment on Monday 7th January 2013 4:13pm

I didn't realize this was a homo-erotic fic. My fault as I didn't read the description thoroughly and notice the HP/SB. I didn't read your other stories due to their synopses but began this one as there didn't seem to be an emphasis on this aspect of the plot. So I will stop at this chapter and not continue.

tiatan101 posted a comment on Monday 24th September 2012 6:19am

That, by far was one of the best stories I have EVER read. I mean, I just can't describe what I love about it, it's just to hard to describe, except as a whole being absolutely wonderful! Keep up your great work, and I look forward to reading more and more of it. =)

mantisgirl posted a comment on Monday 18th April 2011 4:54am

Okay. I've got to sleep sometime. Tomorrow I work, and go to school. And I have a paper due next Thursday. I've got two more sources to read on that. But I wanted to thank you. This story is wonderful and delectable and moves along so nicely and I'm so HOOKED. I want to know, desperately, what happens next. So I can't wait, until I finish my paper. Once it's done, I'll come back and read the rest. Honestly though - your character development of Sirius is wonderful, revealing him in bits and pieces as he reacts to the world around him - it's awesome. I love what you've done with Harry, and his new home especially!

mantisgirl posted a comment on Monday 18th April 2011 2:54am

Beautiful. Just wonderful, the way the relationship grows. I love it.
(goes back to read more)

Arnica posted a comment on Sunday 27th March 2011 6:03pm

So epically wonderful. I really loved every bit of it.

xine267 posted a comment on Saturday 2nd October 2010 11:58am

I absolutely love this story!
Congratulations - it really is amazing.

phlogiston posted a comment on Friday 13th August 2010 2:27pm

Fantastic story. Absolutly brilliant! You have fantastically believable characters and a wonderful storyline. I really enjoyed this, thank you for writing and sharing it.

missingpride1913 posted a comment on Sunday 7th February 2010 3:43am

I must admit that I have never read such a well thought out and put together fanfiction story line. I was curious about Sirius and Harry being together in a way that wasn't sex based but I am extremely happy with this rendition. I wish that this had been the seventh book because I am much happier with the results. I cannot put into words how much I love this story. Please keep up with writing.

Sincerely,
mp1913

Harriverse posted a comment on Wednesday 12th August 2009 6:18am

Quite an enjoyable retelling of the whole shebang. You made good use of your imagination in coming up with many ideas that I've never seen before. The map using obscure dark magic to capture and recreate Sirius, an end to the Dementors, the solution to how Harry became a horcrux, and Ravenclaw as such a revolutionary figure. Your use of Remus as such a pivotal and important character deserves a medal as he's usually seen as impotent. I didn't get the recreating Sirius was what was causing him to be sick until almost the end (when you finally told us) because it was so wrapped up in Remus being subject to the werewolf change. It was a bit disconcerting that Sirius became so useful later in life but Harry didn't after turning into such a strong person. And your final map reference made me think he was searching for more people caught in maps--almost as if Sirius wasn't enough. But that's my humble opinion on actually a rather clever ending.

airgiodslv posted a comment on Saturday 8th August 2009 7:18pm

This is one of the most enthralling and astounding HP books I've ever read. I can't even fathom how much sweat and tears and love went into this, and how you crafted that into such a beautiful and impressive work. Not just the overall arc and the relationships, the planning on where each character was going and how, all the way down to bit-players like Draco, but also the clever details of the silver wand core and Sirius touching souls. It's taken me three full days to devour this, and it truly is the book I wish the world had seen published and read when they got that other one instead. You've done a phenomenal job, and I am awed that you not only dreamed all of this, but that you stuck it through to the end to see it finished. Thank you for sharing this gift with the world.

margaret posted a comment on Monday 22nd June 2009 9:23am

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Ellariina posted a comment on Saturday 30th May 2009 12:52pm

Aww absolutely loved this one! You're very talented and I can hardly remember when I enjoyed a story this much! Thank you for sharing it :)

Kairi.101 posted a comment on Monday 2nd February 2009 2:29am

This was fabulous! I'm not a huge fan of Remus/Tonks and most definitely not a fan of Harry/Sirius, so I hesitated to read this story at the onset. But boy, am I glad I read it. You had me from Chapter One. The plot was intriguing, your characters were lovable (I became a big Augustus Pye fan), and the story flowed very well. The pacing was just right, not too fast, not too slow. I was thoroughly entertained. Thanks for sharing such a lovely piece of work!

Lathena posted a comment on Tuesday 20th January 2009 7:40am

Loved this story. It had a very original premise and was well-written. I liked the epiloge, it was appropriate. I also enjoyed the way harry and sirius's relationship developed. It was very realistic. My other favorite bits was their home in the back of the mansion, with the friendly jam makers and mango tree.

Locomotor posted a comment on Thursday 16th October 2008 12:21pm

To the first reviewer of this chapter, How exactly did it take you over half the story to figure out this was a Harry/Sirius fic? Must not have been reading very well.

Now to the amazing author, this story has been absolutely amazing so far, been keeping me away from my work but its been amazing. Love the way you have written the interactions between the characters and I believe that this ending so far has been better than J.K.'s. Now I'm off to read the other half of the story.

jenifer posted a comment on Thursday 16th October 2008 1:32am

I have enjoyed chapters 2 and 3 too - but waffles for breakfast and the word 'gotten' both sound so very American. The story is interesting and promises to be quite exciting.

Jen posted a comment on Wednesday 15th October 2008 11:09pm

Brilliant start. After reading several fics recently that abounded in Americanisms and where the author had only a nodding acquaintance with English grammar, I found it a great relief to read a tale that it is written in good English.